Skull Toboggan

Please fix my burn/gain deck?

monsters
mucus yolk
2 alien shocktrooper
neo aqua madoor
the calculator
skull mark ladybug
man eater bug
fire princess
spear dragon
destiny hero defender
cobra jar
jinzo 7
injection fairy lily
luster dragon
b.e.w.d
soul tiger
gladiator beast hoplomus
teva
dark ruler hades
gemini elf
obsidian dragon
zolga
SPELLS
card destruction
diff dimension cap
remove trap
scapegoat
poison of old man
fissure
burning land
premature burial
ectoplasmer
chain energy
black pendant
heavy storm
burning land
misfortune
TRAPS
radiant mirror force
3 gift card
solemn wishes
seven tools of bandit
ominous fortunetellin
2 bad reaction simochi
3 numinous healers
Magic jammer
Sak. Armor
gravity bind

mucus yolk is worthless without equip cards. lose it. unless you want to put in “raging flame sprite” because he has 100 attack, so you don’t have to have equip cards for him to be worth anything.

alien shocktrooper is for beatdown decks, not burn decks.

neo aqua madoor… more defense than anything, and I can think of better cards.

the calculator is only good if you have a lot of cards. like if you specal summon a monster and play inferno reckless summon, then it would be a good card, but otherwise, it’s just a weak lvl 2.

skull mark ladybug should be replaced with nimble momonga, and that’s only if you want that effect. nimble momonga lets you get more from your deck, and heals you 1000 as well.

man eater bug. a very old, but not a bad card.

fire princess. ok lets not go there. you have to gain life points for her do do 500 damage, I would just take her out.

spear dragon. awesome card. just don’t let it get attacked by another spear dragon while it’s in defense mode. heeehee…

destiny hero defender. a great card if you have no defense, but it looks like you have a good amount. is that worth letting your opponent draw all those cards?

cobra jar. good if you have a lot of tribute monsters, because if needed, the token is tributable (even if they dont take the 500 damage, because it wasn’t “destroyed”.

jinzo 7. do you need me to tell you why this card should get taken out?

injection fairy lily. good card. keep it in.

luster dragon.. the same applies to this card as with alien shocktrooper.

I dont know what bewd is. sorry

soul tiger is a good defense card. great for burn decks. keep it

gladiator beast hoplomus. same as soul tiger

I would take out teva and put in swords of revealing light. it’s 3 turns that way, instead of just the next turn.

dark ruler ha des… it’s a decent card. It would be better if you had more fiends though. and also it doesn’t go very well in brun decks. if you have him in there, it just makes it another deckw ith no focus.

gemini elf. same as luster dragon and alien shocktrooper

obsidian dragon. good defense.

zolga. since I suggest taking out all your tribute monsters, that should probably go.

this is whereI get to the part where I say that you have no focus. you have a bunch of good cards, but most of them are worthless here. so this is what I suggest:
either make a beatdown deck with high attack monsters and spell and trap negating, or…

put together this deck: 45 cards

MONSTERS: 9
3 – A Cat of Ill Omen
1 – Destiny Hero – Defender
3 – Nurse Reficule The Fallen One
2 – Stealth Bird

SPELLS: 16
1 – Level Limit – Area B
2 – Magical Mallet
3 – Messenger of Peace
1 – Scapegoat
3 – Soul Taker
3 – Upstart Goblin
2 – Wave-Motion Cannon

TRAPS: 21
3 – Bad Reaction To Simochi
2 – Dark Cure
2 – Dimension Wall
3 – Gift Card
1 – Gravity Bind
2 – Horn of Heaven
3 – Judgment of Anubis
2 – Magic Jammer
1 – Seven Tools of the Bandit
2 – The Eye of Truth

this is the burn deck that I run, and I hardly ever lose, not even with decks with jinzo. horn of heaven, soul taker, messenger of peace, and level limit – area B keep me safe.

good luck.

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